Week 12: Assessment 1 feedback

A tutor has given me constructive feedback on my blog for assessment one. The feedbacks contain on my post published from week one to six to make improvements for the third assessment.

These feedbacks were: Room for more evaluation, an analysis in the peer feedback space, tightening up the prose and passive languages.

I have applied the suggested feedback in my blogs. I’m slowly trying to get the hang of giving feedbacks to peers as I have given feedback to additional peers. I also changed the theme of my blog to make it more alive and added a button where a list of weekly blogs will appear to make it easier to access.


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